July 19, 2020, 11:28 AM
An ache hammers at his temples. It's a leftover from the fierce anticipation of a fight. You sit in the corner of a bar, and you watch the first blow being exchanged (a dull thunk of a fist against a jawbone) and even though you're not in the fight, not even close to it, your heart beats quick. Your fists clench around a salt shaker. It's electricity.
They walk in silence. Colin chews at his lip, ready to offer an awkward farewell and then to peel off, but then Finley asks him-- What brought you here?
His heart lurches again. All types of confrontation feels the same to your brain. He considers many answers: a sharp Why does it matter? or a soft and distant I don't understand. But what comes out of his mouth is neither. "I couldn't stay back home."
"Anyone could've found me. It just happened to be Donovan. I just couldn't remain where I was." An interrogation, but Finley didn't have the authority, the confidence, of a detective or a cop. It could've been either one of them handcuffed to the table, or listening through the bulletproof screen glass.
They walk in silence. Colin chews at his lip, ready to offer an awkward farewell and then to peel off, but then Finley asks him-- What brought you here?
His heart lurches again. All types of confrontation feels the same to your brain. He considers many answers: a sharp Why does it matter? or a soft and distant I don't understand. But what comes out of his mouth is neither. "I couldn't stay back home."
"Anyone could've found me. It just happened to be Donovan. I just couldn't remain where I was." An interrogation, but Finley didn't have the authority, the confidence, of a detective or a cop. It could've been either one of them handcuffed to the table, or listening through the bulletproof screen glass.
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down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 11:10 AM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 11:28 AM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 11:56 AM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 12:11 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 12:39 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 01:05 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 01:37 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 01:57 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 02:32 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 02:47 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 03:06 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 03:28 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 03:54 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 04:09 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 04:25 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 04:52 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 05:20 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 05:44 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Finley Grebe - July 19, 2020, 06:04 PM
RE: down and out over the mount - by Colin - July 19, 2020, 06:37 PM