April 15, 2025, 10:09 PM
Her desire to be free, either within the ravine or beyond it, was so powerful that when Sulukinak made her last reach for that cursed little girl she was certain that she would either grab the little one or the bitch that grappled for her.
In the end, she missed by a hair.
Her reach was great — her passion to keep a family intact, insurmountable — but it wasn't enough.
Her teeth closed and she thought she tasted flesh, maybe blood; she pulled and made herself fall back.
But her teeth had not met the girl child.
The blood was her own.
And as she fell, her eyes went wide with this final betrayal.
In the end, she missed by a hair.
Her reach was great — her passion to keep a family intact, insurmountable — but it wasn't enough.
Her teeth closed and she thought she tasted flesh, maybe blood; she pulled and made herself fall back.
But her teeth had not met the girl child.
The blood was her own.
And as she fell, her eyes went wide with this final betrayal.
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there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - March 31, 2025, 01:01 AM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - March 31, 2025, 08:27 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - March 31, 2025, 09:46 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 01, 2025, 12:04 AM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - April 01, 2025, 12:29 AM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 02, 2025, 10:58 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - April 03, 2025, 09:46 AM
RE: there in the smoke - by Ghenaya - April 09, 2025, 11:30 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 15, 2025, 07:31 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - April 15, 2025, 07:45 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 15, 2025, 08:09 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - April 15, 2025, 09:00 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 15, 2025, 09:58 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Sulukinak - April 15, 2025, 10:09 PM
RE: there in the smoke - by Other Shore - April 15, 2025, 10:29 PM

