Lost Creek Hollow Should I revise or rewrite
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Very well, then.  Good day to you.  She dipped her head, and that was pretty much it.  Treason was all about business, so if things were done, she'd leave it at that.  She watched Mona return back towards wherever Bearclaw was, meanwhile pondering just what to say to Rannoch and Terance.  Probably pretty close to what was said.

Once she was sure that Mona was well on her way, Treason went back to observing the herd for a while longer.
Arbiter is often not a nice person and will think mean things without acting on them.
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Messages In This Thread
Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - October 18, 2018, 04:20 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - October 19, 2018, 02:14 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - October 20, 2018, 08:36 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - October 23, 2018, 11:24 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - October 27, 2018, 01:12 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - November 03, 2018, 06:41 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - November 03, 2018, 07:42 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - November 08, 2018, 07:34 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - November 09, 2018, 09:43 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - November 15, 2018, 05:21 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - November 19, 2018, 01:07 AM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - November 21, 2018, 04:18 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - November 22, 2018, 12:37 AM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - November 28, 2018, 07:01 PM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - November 30, 2018, 01:03 AM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Mona - December 11, 2018, 12:04 AM
RE: Should I revise or rewrite - by Arbiter - December 15, 2018, 10:49 PM