Moonspear ring of fire

Would you guys mind if we fade this one out with a lesson or something? I'm trying to clean up my threads and freshen things up for March, and this one's from November. If you'd rather continue it, that's fine too, figured I'd ask!

Dragomir had to bunch the muscles in his neck and dig his nails into the ground to prevent Antares from yanking him forward. The increased vigour came as a surprise, throwing Dragomir temporarily off guard. He steadied himself as quickly as he could, but Antares managed to budge him several generous inches in the interim. Setting his feet, he hauled back and the satisfying sound of flesh and fur ripping reached his ears.

Excitement coursed through him, making his heart thrum and his blood sing. A muffled growl reverberated through his nose. With several hard jerks of his body, Dragomir ripped back on the coon's carcass until at last it came apart and he stumbled backward, holding a smaller piece than the one left behind in Antares' grip. Flagging his tail jovially, the boy flopped to the ground, thoroughly exhausted, and began to gnaw on his prize.