Porcupine Ridge simmer down boy

I wanted this thread when it was first made, glad I get another shot at it. :D

Rue was exploring the corners of her new home, and it seemed that she had reached the edge of the world. Her pack's scent had long since faded into the distance, but even so she knew that this would be a spot she would continue to visit. From her position at the edge of the ridge, the mountains fell away into a tremendous, breaktaking valley. Unknown to Rue, her alphas had attempted to settle in that very same valley before running into difficulties and instead relocating to Blacktail Deer Plateau. Just one small twist of fate, and that could have been the place she called home. 

The arrival of the stomping hulkmonster thouroughly startled Rue. She couldn't see the creature rounding the edge of the ridge, but she could certainly hear it thudding closer. Anything that walked that heavily would make short work out of the diminuitive Rue. The girl glanced about wildly, knowing she only had precious moments to escape from view. In a stroke of luck, she looked over the edge of the ridge and discovered a small ledge. She hopped down onto the ledge and crouched. 

Soon the thudding ceased, and Rue breathed a sign of relief. Perhaps the coast was clear? She started to lift herself up, but then she froze once more as she heard voices. Wolf voices. Before Rue could contemplate her next move, the thudding began once more. Dirt and rocks fell away from the overhanging ridge and rained down onto Rue. She ducked her head between her paws for cover, and that was how she noticed the crack that was forming in her ledge. As scary as the hulkbeast was, the thought of ledge breaking and dropping her a thousand miles down into the vale scared her more. She tried to stand and pull herself back onto the ridge, but the shift in weight only deepened the crack. She crouched once more, panic mounting. 

"Help!" she called out, her voice strangled with fear.