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Helios on July 07, 2019
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I love watching Zephyr’s development, and am honored to be a part of it! <3 “His legs ache and his chest burns, and the distance he has put between himself and his home has lodged itself in his heart like a burning knife.” Adore this line :heart_eyes:
Given by
Ibis (Ghost) on November 27, 2019
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Annaliese on November 28, 2019
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Takiyok on November 28, 2019
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:(
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Andraste on November 30, 2019
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I don’t know a ton about Zeph but there’s sm depth in this post <3 poor thing
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Huā on January 11, 2020
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Lainie on January 11, 2020
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The feels you write are almost too good cuz they hurt so much <3 I love Zephyr.
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Hyacinth on January 11, 2020
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crie s
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Kratos on January 12, 2020
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it's impressive and inspiring to see how zephyr's ever changing and chaotic life has affected him thus far. i love how raw and emotional each scar is. it's rly intriguing to see him react to each obstacle! i especially love this post for how his dream (nightmare?) was written <3
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Kratos on February 08, 2020
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Thanks for breaking my heart :( This whole thread has been a wild ride of development and I am so proud that we were able to get through it! I adore Zeph a lot. This post particularly rly hit home <3
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Kratos on March 23, 2020
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I tried resisting giving more kudos for about five seconds, but this line made me smile and laugh so much; “A deep rumble starts to grow in his chest immediately, voice purposefully pitched a little lower as he tries to channel his inner Kratos, if he has one of those — he thinks so, after how much time they've spent in each other's personal space.” I love it!
Given by
Huā on March 26, 2020
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;_; my heart
Given by
RIP Kavik on April 17, 2020
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cries forever
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Caerus on April 18, 2020
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Kratos on April 18, 2020
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i love your imagery, and how well this flows
Given by
Merrick on April 20, 2020
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lolllll
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Derg on October 30, 2020
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This is so beautiful ;-;
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Stjornuati on November 07, 2020
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I love how you included the bit about Kratos coming back for a hot minute and how, instead of just writing it off, you portrayed it as Zephyr hallucinating.
Given by
Astara on November 16, 2020
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murder tooth tango -- thank u for the spree <3
Given by
Y2K9 on November 19, 2020
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watch how hard I can cry
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Lane on November 20, 2020
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So darn precious! Mad respect-- emotions are so hard to write. Zeph deserves alll the sparks of happiness!
Given by
Hyacinth on November 23, 2020
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LUUUUV
Given by
Tabriëlle on November 26, 2020
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love this <3
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Daighre on November 28, 2020
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"Something about this stranger is terribly off in a way that both repulses him and draws him in — and suddenly, he doesn't care whether he hates him or not. All he cares about is finding out what fuels all this dark, childish rage. It reminds him of himself in so many ways, he can't help his fascination.", or, when the dysfunction, twisted fascination, and repulsion hit just right.
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Daighre on November 28, 2020
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"When the conversation ends in whatever, there's no hope of fixing the situation. But maybe Daighre doesn't care about that. It seems clear to Zephyr by now that the blonde boy will only accept things that are absolutely perfect by his standards, smooth without a hitch. That might be less baffling if his standards were anything close to the norm. Frankly, Zephyr has little investment at this point. He just can't pull himself away — like watching a car crash, knowing full well you have no desire to see the mangled aftermath." When your character wonderfully and delightfully gets read to absolute filth. Also, that last line, with its metaphor and imagery.
Given by
Taikon on November 29, 2020
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T______T
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Simmik on November 29, 2020
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:(
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Stjornuati on December 01, 2020
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WELP. GREAT TIMING THERE, BUDDY.
Given by
Osiris’s Ghost on December 01, 2020
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HAH. GOTEM.
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Stjornuati on December 01, 2020
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This is so gorgeous. You have such a skill with words. I could envision every sentence. <3
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Huā on December 01, 2020
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really lovely , like artwork in words
Given by
Āzon on December 01, 2020
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Take my goddamn kudos just take it ;-;
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Taikon on December 01, 2020
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I can't even. There's so much wonderful imagery here, and this is so deep, and I just aalgskjaslg
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Simmik on December 01, 2020
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just wow
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Y2K9 on December 01, 2020
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woah
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Daighre on December 02, 2020
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"He thinks of Alessia — of the void she'd left in him from such a young age, the hole carved in his heart by every unanswered 'I love you,' every small hurt she'd never calmed when he went running to her. Her coldness had rubbed off on him, planted the seed for the chaotic child he had become. And at the very end, in those last moments… she'd had nothing left to give him. No closure, no comfort; only the slow fading of a dying woman, the last remnants of warm life projected onto the only thing near enough to receive it. He hated her for it, at first. He hated her for all of it, every wound from the earliest to the very last."
Beautiful, poignant, and, ultimately, heart-wrenching. He is the product of his own upbringing, seemingly very much created by everyone who abandoned him, everyone who he loved and was never loved by in return. I read the line, "Her coldness had rubbed off on him, planted the seed for the chaotic child he had become." and my heart aches for him. And now—
"Every gain and loss, every tragedy and victory, every investment whether good or bad — they're all worthless, aren't they?"
A journey into nihilism well spent and well documented.
Given by
Daighre on December 02, 2020
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"He is the ice wraith, frosted over look-alike of the boy he should have been." Stunning and poetic.
Given by
Daighre on December 02, 2020
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"'I was interested before — and then I wasn't, because you're an insufferable asshole. And now I just want to know what the fuck your problem is. You're the one who walked over here. You're the one who was a dick from the moment you saw me. You keep calling me crazy, but maybe you're the crazy one — you don't even know how to interact with people properly.'" When the dialogue is a perfect blend of self-projection and malicious intent but is ultimately the truth.
Given by
Taikon on December 02, 2020
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T_T QUIT MAKING ME CRY
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Takiyok on December 02, 2020
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wow
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RIP Polaris on December 03, 2020
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a literal masterpiece
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Valmúa on December 04, 2020
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<3
Given by
Rowan on April 13, 2021
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I love your writing sm omggg <3
May 26, 2021, 04:55 PM
(This post was last modified: May 31, 2021, 08:21 PM by Zephyr.
Edit Reason: not me messing up the lyrics...oops
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