Phoenix Maplewood i reckon not, ms grimshaw

"gawdamn!" colt shouted in admiration. he pounded alongside the beast, listening to it wheeze in shock and pain, bleating hoarsely under gun's heavy, unending bite.
the old doe staggered, then knelt. 
she tried to claw herself up with sharp hooves, but was unable, and sank to her knees, unable to catch any breath. colt soared in to hold her as gun finished the job.