Noctisardor Bypass the last few drops from the holy grail
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A scream resounded around the pack lands. It set Etienne's teeth on his edge. And made his stomach drop. That was Druid. He wanted to help her, but Anselm. A soft whimper. And then Heda was there. Rounded belly stepping between the two fighting men.

And Etienne was scared then for her, for Anselm, for Druid. And he couldn't breathe. His chest felt tight and each breath grew harder and harder to draw. Add in the pain of trying to breathe anyway with his bruised ribs. A knifes blade the thin edge of his panic, sharp and deep. Each squeeze drawing his pain higher and higher. His chest, his ribs, grew tighter and tighter. Blinding, engulfing pain. The edges of his vision growing dim and blurred.

A gasping strangled yell ASE

Then the pain grew too much and his eyes rolled back in his head and he fainted.

I was going to skip him, but nows there so much going on. I'll add another. Knowing how a panic attack feels and add in extremely bruised ribs. I think its safe to say the pain and a mix of panic would make him pass out. If this doesn't seem realistic i can edit. I did look it up on google and consensus says it would make the pain way worse. And given Glaukos size heh
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the last few drops from the holy grail - by Glaûkos - March 05, 2024, 06:51 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 05, 2024, 07:15 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 05, 2024, 08:05 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 06, 2024, 06:12 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 06, 2024, 09:07 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 06, 2024, 02:33 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Druid - March 06, 2024, 02:41 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 06, 2024, 10:21 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 09, 2024, 04:05 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 09, 2024, 04:37 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 09, 2024, 08:42 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 10, 2024, 09:58 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Druid - March 10, 2024, 10:40 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 10, 2024, 01:31 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 10, 2024, 03:27 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Dinah - March 10, 2024, 04:03 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 10, 2024, 04:18 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Druid - March 10, 2024, 08:25 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 11, 2024, 03:38 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Dinah - March 22, 2024, 10:41 PM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Etienne - March 23, 2024, 05:08 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Druid - March 24, 2024, 10:00 AM
RE: the last few drops from the holy grail - by Anselm - March 26, 2024, 07:08 AM